I should try knitting ... ( study 2h )

Vision: The vision is nice. Good showing of foreground and background, particularly with the trees on the far right. Also good vision of birds walking around on the power cables. I can also tell that the bike is far away, but not underneath the power cables. I only gave 4.5 stars for vision because I would like to know where the coffee comes from in the picture. I think a coffee shop in the distance would add great charisma to the overall picture.

Originality: The originality is fresh. I see multiple items in the image that tell a story. The title is the first piece of the story, it let's me know that the person is considering a different hobby. If we look at the picture, we find out why. We can tell that the character has masochistic tendencies because despite all of the green grass that is smooth for bike path. We can also tell from the eye patch that something bad happened with a previous hobby and they said "I should try biking", but not before having bad eye injury. Also possibly pirate so that is also intriguing. I like how we see a medical box with many band aids that foreshadow how each finger was band aided.

Technique: I have rated only a 4.5 on the technique because I think a different technique could be used to make markings on the legs. It looks like a muddy cat has swatted the knees and legs of your character many times, but it would make sense if they were scratches from falling off the bike and onto the rocks.

Impact: The impact was well done in this picture so I have rated 5 stars. Everywhere in the picture we can see how rough the bike path has been. Everything from the scratches on the legs, bike tire has flown off somewhere, the face expression has disappointment and the body posture is slouched from the rough day of falling of a bike.

Synopsis: Overall a great picture with good storytelling using the scenery. I may have been over harsh and critical on the vision and technique but it's only because I know you have great potential. My favorite aspect of this art is the lighting, I give that 6 stars because it brings picture to life and the gradient is just like a real sky and lighting.